A review of "Hannah's Dream: A Novel" — 16 weeks ago
Overall, this book was pretty decent. It had a good premise and some very interesting characters. But there were some issues that keep me from saying it was worth consuming. First, the writer seemed to “lose” part of one characters back-story. First her parents died one way and then another. It might not be a big deal to other readers but I hate that kind of thing. I find it distracting because I wonder if it was a mistake or done on purpose. I’m fairly certain this was just a mistake. Do publishers not employ copy editors anymore? It was glaringly obvious to me so I can’t imagine it getting past a professional. Also, there were some truly superfluous characters. I feel like they were inserted to pad the plot but there was so much more she could have done with the major characters! It was like every time she wasn’t sure what to do with her story, she added an animal or random character. It’s a shame because she had a very interesting story to tell and strong main characters. She had plenty to work with! Also, the ending was too pat. Everything fell into place with none of the conflicts that were foreshadowed in previous chapters. And one character appeared to do a complete 180 in attitude in order for this to happen. All in all, I was not pleased with the way the book ended. I might recommend this book to my less particular reading buddies.








