I like Hawthorne a lot—he is a wise dude. He infuses a lot of important philosophical comments into his works (short stories + Scarlet Letter). However, the plot of this book is so weak and uninteresting, as are most of the characters.
There are three chapters in this book that are absolutely horrendous. These are the first chapter, which serves as a longwinded introduction to the Pyncheon ancestry, whom we have no reason to care for yet. Then there is a chapter where it spends a couple pages talking about the Pyncheon hens. I know these hens parallel the Pyncheons themselves, but holy crap was it ridiculous; I skipped it. Not to give away the plot, there is a chapter called Governor Pyncheon that is the worst chapter of any book I have ever read, seriously.
The plot is just so uninteresting. And Judge Pyncheon, Clifford, and Phoebe are horribly developed characters. Phoebe is completely unbelievable; as a love story, having one of the two main characters this unrealistic is a horrible mistake. She is portrayed as a flawless angel with no intrinsic personality. Clifford has potential as a character, but the question of his innocence is too secretive; how are we to judge him as a person if we don’t know if he is innocent or guilty? The same goes for the judge, who Hawthorne constantly puts down, yet who doesn’t show any negative traits for quite some time.
I understand that as a romance, the characters and plot aren’t supposed to be realistic; but can’t they at least be deep?
There are things I like about the book, though. As I said, I think Hawthorne makes a lot of interesting philosophical comments and examples. If you’re looking for wisdom, assuming that is to be gained from analyzing human drama objectively, this book is worth reading. But as entertainment, this book fails miserably. Read The Scarlet Letter if you haven’t already, or pick up his short stories, most of which are pretty entertaining.