This is the worst book I have read in ages. Perhaps I ought to be honest here and say that I only read about 70 pages out of 410. However I think that was enough.
I have read several of Peter Biddlecombe’s other books and really enjoyed them. His line is that you haven’t really travelled until you have travelled on business, something that I can relate to. He’s also travelled to some very interesting places on business, like French-speaking Africa, and has a way of telling the reader about places through anecdotes, wry observations and recounting his conversations with the locals. In one book he actually writes about two places I know well, Auckland and Sydney. I enjoyed his humorous angle on both places, and could follow his wanderings around both cities easily through his descriptions, although he rarely names a street or other landmark.
After these other books, I was looking forward to this one, but it turned out to be a major disappointment.
First, there were the inaccuracies – Boisie, Idaho; antelope in Montana; Park Brothers, the makers of Monopoly; and Pennsylvania being on the confederate side in the Civil War, to name a few (and remember I only read 20% of the book). There are also spelling and grammar errors. A good editor who knew the topic should have spotted these.
The major problem was the whole concept of the book. He has tried to link all the states into a burger theme, by labelling them as parts of or types of burger. This is a contrivance that comes across as forced, and simply doesn’t work.
Worse still, because he is trying to fit all 50 states into one book (as opposed to about 20 places in his other books), it gives him less space in which to do what he does well. There are far fewer conversations with locals to illuminate some quirky local habit, less time spent observing and drawing a verbal picture to set the scene for a reader. Instead we have a garbled description of many places and events, with some heavy-handed attempts at humour that sound like one-liners from a failed stand-up comedian. Overall it is embarrasingly bad for an author who has previously published some very engaging and enjoyable books.
I would have liked to give this book a zero star rating, but the All Consuming software wouldn’t let me.