I want my damn money back.
The only reason I finished this rambling piece of insomina-prevention was because I clung to the remote hope that it would get better. And at worst I wanted to know how it would end.

I don’t know what the author was on when he wrote this but he should definitely stop taking it.

I completely understand the technique authors use where they leave ‘gaps’ in the plot to allow the reader to ‘fill in the blanks’ b ut this guy doen’st leave gaps… he leaves great gaping chasms within which the reader can become irrevocably lost.

I want my money and my time back!