iamos
Brooklyn
A story about this — 4 years ago
Not the sort of thing I normally read, and definitely not the sort of thing I would ever read v-e-r-y s-l-o-w-l-y, three times, if I weren’t being paid for it, . . . but as it happens, I was being paid for it (proofreading). It’s okay, I guess, if you like mysteries. I didn’t always find the actions or italicized thoughts of the protagonista convincing—unless she’s just not terribly bright, which is certainly possible—but in general I’d say the story is plausible and realistic, and the writing is clear.

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