It won’t let me say wishy-washy for some reason…

The thing I noticed the most about this book, sadly, was the sloppy copyediting. A character in chapter 1 changed names in the text, a point was made of another character being flown somewhere & later the same character was said to have taken a boat to her destination – the pilot thing was obviously the correct one for the story since it came up more often, but no one caught these errors, which is a shame since they completely pulled me out of the story.